All Comments on 'When I Get Home'

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why_not_jillwhy_not_jillabout 10 years ago
Sounds like a nice way to come home

I liked it short and too the point... Easy for me to picture myself as the object of your desire..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Wow!!!

That was brilliant!! Love your writing style! We need to see more from you. That totally had me picturing myself in the story ;-).

jenorma2012jenorma2012almost 8 years ago
not really

this would have have been a good story, if it was not for her being cuffed to the bed, that made this a not so good story

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Nonsense

I loved that she was tied to the bed! I only wish this had been longer!!

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