All Comments on 'Light Switch Phase'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Well

You have an amazing talent my friend, in the poetic arts.

SkinandSinSkinandSinover 10 years agoAuthor

Thank you. :D

TrixareforkidsTrixareforkidsalmost 10 years ago
Good till the end...

Then you busted out with these GREAT lines.

percussive maintenance

Is often the best way to go

SkinandSinSkinandSinalmost 10 years agoAuthor
:)

Thank you! :) *blushez*

todski28todski28almost 10 years ago
i think

You could lose the three ands in the second to last stanza.

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SkinandSinSkinandSinalmost 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks, todski

:)

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What I write is purely fiction, merely an exploration of my mind's small, dark crevasses - whatever genre I choose is not a nod of consent for the events or character motivations contained in my work. Call it an outlet, call it my imagined perversions, call it what you will. I...