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Light Switch Phase

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/09/14

Well

You have an amazing talent my friend, in the poetic arts.

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by SkinandSin01/11/14

Thank you. :D

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by Trixareforkids06/04/14

Good till the end...

Then you busted out with these GREAT lines.

percussive maintenance
Is often the best way to go

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by SkinandSin06/04/14

:)

Thank you! :) *blushez*

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by todski2806/04/14

i think

You could lose the three ands in the second to last stanza.

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by SkinandSin06/10/14

Thanks, todski

:)

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