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Kate and I Ch. 19-20

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by Anonymous

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by redlion7501/21/14

total waste of an update. nothing to move the story

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by Anonymous01/21/14

It'a a big waste of time to read this. It was way to short and it didn't really say much. You also need to check for grammer errors as there are a few. And stop using military time it doesn't fit the story since there isn't anything to do with the military. Just use real people time ex 1:30 pm and not 1330!!

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by coloradoexile01/21/14

Please get an editor

I like your story, but the typos and grammar and syntax errors really take away from it. Please do yourself a favor and get an editor.

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