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Kate and I Ch. 45-48

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by Anonymous01/28/14

Get a NEW Proofreader

Get a new Proof Reader, or one who knows how to maximize your efforts. You are a good writer . . . but the numerous typos, and the occasional missing or wrong word,
are very easy to fix.

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by m48gunner01/28/14

Short

It is a fun story to read, but these little glimpse you are giving us are just to short, it is becoming frustrating to read. Perhaps you could combine a couple of the chapter together and submit them so that we would have a bit more to chew on when you do submit.....just a thought!

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