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by Anonymous01/12/14

Dreadful.

I've seen better erotic writing in a transcription of a celebrity sex tape. Zero editing has been done. Capitalizations, run-on sentences, Dialogue smashing into descriptive paragraphs... and this is an Erotic Couplings story, certainly not Romance. Actually, make that just a Couplings story.

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