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Fun
Sounds like a good time had by all! Would love to experience that
Better in Bed
Glad they got out of the (clean) water! Also glad that they quickly got over the awkwardness in the post-coital group discussion. Which turned out to be a pre-coital chat! Still banal, but pleasant! (Damning with faint praise!)
4*
This chapter was better
The emotions behind the spontaneity of the sex was crucial. I am glad that both couples are okay. I sounds as if it could have been pretty traumatic after it was over. I hope everyone appreciates each other even more. I like that they ended with each other, proving that their love-making with their spouse is best.
at least
only 1 page of writ corpse
a Lot of posibilities left out there
I thought you had a story with a lot more possibilities than a short quip. You had enough meat in what you were trying to do; however I felt like I was left hanging and waiting for more.
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