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by Anonymous

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by Blue69lover01/17/14

Very nice

Loved your story. You did a nice job of communicating your feeling of lust. Keep writing!

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by Daryl812201/18/14

Write more...

I know what I'll be thinking about tomorrow morning during my shower. Ahhhh...

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by Anonymous03/12/14

from Eric

Nice job setting the arena and smooth transition and short and sweet...just long enough. Good writing

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