Maid to Slave

Fantastic

THis is my dream

Everyone is a winner!

Obviously everyone accepts and enjoys their role in this close knit family. Wonderfully written story about how making others happy can make you happy too.

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Excellent read

Sub Slut Mommy

This is an excellent story and I heartily hope for many more installments. The testosterone laden father-son competition is excellently portrayed and the many different stories that can be developed from here offer great potential.

Hot Slave Ass

I would love to hear more about using her ass

good!

REALLY GGOOD! would like to hear more.

MORE!!

Please write the next chapter, i can't wait

GF

The Gf should learn her future role being dominated, too.

i loved it pleaz write more

good story

Beautiful but I wished the boy to be her step son.

just a thought

It might be a good twist to make the boy's girlfriend a slave too. Mabye not right off, but start her training too.

Sick S O B's

If you think this is a good story you are sick!!!!!!

Need part 2!!!

Good story definitley looking forward to a part 2

Would love to hear more

I've read about on third of your stories so far and have yet to be disappointed. Please consider adding to this and also with the "like a good neighbor" story. I'd love to see it continue as well picking up where the mother is 'blackmailing' the widowed father about seeing them at his pool. Very good writing and awesomely erotic. Thanks.
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a lovely tale of how a slut-sub should be used, and give pleasure to her men.

More Please

A great story, or shoukd I say first chapter. You have laid a great scenario with a whole range of situations the slave maid will have to be put through1

More

Any possibility of more of this story. I really enjoyed it and would like to read more about these people. Thanks.

Great story!

I was totally turned on by this. You have to wrote another one, don't leave me hanging!!

YES!

PLEASE write more.....

IT's all in the family

excellent story My father and I shared my sister and mother on a weekly basis. At the end of the week they'd have to describe things they did to satisfy us. It didn't take long for dad and I to have them getting things on just between them. Dad and i also got into the cock sucking and ass fucking between us making them watch and telling them how we gave better blow jobs, and had better ass than the two of them. we decided that we could improve their talents by making them into whores, having them approach strangers and offer them pussy or blow jobs. we got off watching them take the cocks. When things were finished we required that they tell us sin detail how they love the life of cock sluts. it worked out well for all of us. they learned to use their cunts, asses and mouths.

best story ever

That was the hottest story ive read. Wish there were about athousand sequels to it.

super hot

this was an awesome story love to hear more

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Great story! Please write more!

loved it

I identified closely with the mother mainly because this story is very similar to one of my own fantasies of being controlled by a domineering husband and son. Thank you. encore769@yahoo

being controlled by your husband and son

Yes women should be controlled by all males in their lives.

REALLY hoped this would

be a multi-page story. Your title is very, very attracting

Good one

I liked it and wish there were more

good one

Very hot story.. pls continue this