All Comments on 'Maid to Slave'

THis is my dream

Obviously everyone accepts and enjoys their role in this close knit family. Wonderfully written story about how making others happy can make you happy too.

Excellent read

This is an excellent story and I heartily hope for many more installments. The testosterone laden father-son competition is excellently portrayed and the many different stories that can be developed from here offer great potential.

I would love to hear more about using her ass

REALLY GGOOD! would like to hear more.

Please write the next chapter, i can't wait

The Gf should learn her future role being dominated, too.

i loved it pleaz write more

Beautiful but I wished the boy to be her step son.

It might be a good twist to make the boy's girlfriend a slave too. Mabye not right off, but start her training too.

If you think this is a good story you are sick!!!!!!

Good story definitley looking forward to a part 2

I've read about on third of your stories so far and have yet to be disappointed. Please consider adding to this and also with the "like a good neighbor" story. I'd love to see it continue as well picking up where the mother is 'blackmailing' the widowed father about seeing them at his pool. Very good writing and awesomely erotic. Thanks.

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a lovely tale of how a slut-sub should be used, and give pleasure to her men.

A great story, or shoukd I say first chapter. You have laid a great scenario with a whole range of situations the slave maid will have to be put through1

Any possibility of more of this story. I really enjoyed it and would like to read more about these people. Thanks.

I was totally turned on by this. You have to wrote another one, don't leave me hanging!!

PLEASE write more.....

excellent story My father and I shared my sister and mother on a weekly basis. At the end of the week they'd have to describe things they did to satisfy us. It didn't take long for dad and I to have them getting things on just between them. Dad and i also got into the cock sucking and ass fucking between us making them watch and telling them how we gave better blow jobs, and had better ass than the two of them. we decided that we could improve their talents by making them into whores, having them approach strangers and offer them pussy or blow jobs. we got off watching them take the cocks. When things were finished we required that they tell us sin detail how they love the life of cock sluts. it worked out well for all of us. they learned to use their cunts, asses and mouths.

That was the hottest story ive read. Wish there were about athousand sequels to it.

this was an awesome story love to hear more

Great story! Please write more!

I identified closely with the mother mainly because this story is very similar to one of my own fantasies of being controlled by a domineering husband and son. Thank you. encore769@yahoo

Yes women should be controlled by all males in their lives.

be a multi-page story. Your title is very, very attracting

I liked it and wish there were more

Very hot story.. pls continue this

Love the story would love to hear more

Let's hear more!

Please write more of this!

Frankly this story is degrading and disgusting.

That was a good short story! I'd like to see what you have planned going forward!

Good story! Keep up this story and see where it goes from here!

Lots of good ways to take this story a lezdom girlfriend who maybe brings a few friends to learn how to treat a slave a fully stocked dungeon the possibilities are great

great is there a ch. 2

OMFG this is my life. only thing is the young boy fucking me is my step son. my husband let him fuck me the first time he was a little uder age. now he is a full grown man with a nice cock like his dad. they both use me in this same way. I am there house whore and they have started to share me with there friends as well. I love my new life I know I should be ashamed but I am not I love being a whore for them.

love it

Love it but over ten years ago like to see how it goes please