Intense does not require edgy and you have shown that here. The ebb and flow between them is both fun and erotic. It is all in the nuances back and forth. Some may not feel or see that. That's okay. Folks who put tabasco on everything no long taste the original flavors of the dish.
Look forward to more from you and perhaps more from these two?
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Well done
Intense does not require edgy and you have shown that here. The ebb and flow between them is both fun and erotic. It is all in the nuances back and forth. Some may not feel or see that. That's okay. Folks who put tabasco on everything no long taste the original flavors of the dish.
Look forward to more from you and perhaps more from these two?
Oooooh yes!
Sexy as hell. And beautifully written too. Loved it.
Perfect from start to finish
The intensity ramped up at a perfect pace creating a fast, hot read. I think those last words are some of my favorite ever to end a story.
Wonderful
Perfect story - very nicely done and I love the inner dialogue.
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