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Pizza Delivery

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by FA_JF01/12/14

Tsk, tsk, Ashson

Pussy fir? Yes, if she's packing a large evergreen in her crotch, it would be noticeable. ;)

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by Anonymous01/12/14

Another great story from you!

I always look forward to your next story, every time i see you've written one i read it straight away. Keep 'em coming! (no pun intended) ;)

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by Anonymous01/13/14

I just choked

On the fir ball and the story. Both made me barf.

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by Naive_nympho02/16/14

I'm being a bit of a downer...

Nice story, I have no qualms about its composition or credibility. You write well.
That being said, I absolutely despised this sentence; "Raping you?" I asked, plainly stunned. "The way you were dressed you were a walking invitation for sex."
RAPE IS RAPE. Don't try and justify it. I love a good reluctance story, but blaming the victim for the assault is beyond wrong. It is exactly the type of behaviour that allows our societies rape culture to manifest and act like unconsented sex is something to be joked about.

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