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by LarryInSeattle01/13/14

Fantastic!

'nuff said.

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by Anonymous01/14/14

"He was beaming his approval at what was transgressing before him. "

Do you really mean 'transgressing'?
Meaning - "going beyond the limits of (what is morally, socially, or legally acceptable)."
Surely doesn't apply in the context!
No doubt some cretin will accuse me of being a 'grammar nazi' or some similar stupidity but if you are not sure of the meaning of a word, don't use it.

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by irvlyn01/15/14

Veddy British

and well done. The grammar Nazi is right about the definition but screw him. There are times when right is wrong ... and wrong is quite right!

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