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Life Moves On

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by Anonymous

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by Ashesh901/11/14

That'sh a Nishe poem,

Tod ! Hic ! 5-ed.

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by Maria239401/12/14

worth a 6 at least!

I would have given this one a big, green E! Excellent entertainment, Todski!

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by UnderYourSpell01/13/14

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Trouble is when you hide in a bottle all you get is memories dulled for a while, an almighty headache and an empty pocket.

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by Oldbear6301/13/14

Excellent!

Really liked the way thoughts were interrupted without hurting the flow. Sad on several levels.

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by Tsotha04/28/14

Well. Drinking doesn't make me forget, and I've always wondered why. And, since I don't forget, you'd think I'd have learned not to drink, by now.

These lines:

celebrating
what I don't know
why I can't say

Notice that the can be read two different ways:

celebrating
what? I don't know
Why? I can't say

or

celebrating what I don't know,
and why I can't say.

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by Matryoshka05/20/14

(_)D. I'll buy a round

Amazing how when we drink to forget all it does is weaken the lock that keeps the memories at bay. And the rosy glow that accompanies a few lighthearted brews is turned into grey fog when memories are involved.
Love how the word groupings are unpredictable, unstable like thoughts tasting a bit too much JD.

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