All Comments on 'The Group Pt. 01: The Beginning'

Well written, very descriptive. I so like the thought of being "double ended" by two young, hot, guys. Having my boundaries pushed by an oversized cock. Throat and ass. Hoping your story writing will continue. Perhaps some body descriptions would add to the narrative?

great story and hope you continue it but isnt this the same as what you wrote a year ago?

This is so my dream! I love to be in the middle of a gay threesome, or I'll lick out a cunt if she wants that too! Just keep fucking and sucking me, OK? I so want to join this Club! I can't remember my password, I am so fucked up! My ass is so slippery, my mouth is so filled with saliva that wishes it was cum!

Pick and tense and stick with it.

Past or present, not both.

This is awful.