Please keep it up. I'd love to see where it goes. A few grammatical errors, but nothing horrific. :)
Good start with small amount of errors.
No major grammatical issues. Just one or two here and there. Really good start. Hope you carry on soon.
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Please keep it up. I'd love to see where it goes. A few grammatical errors, but nothing horrific. :)
Good start with small amount of errors.
Great Start!!
No major grammatical issues. Just one or two here and there. Really good start. Hope you carry on soon.
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