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Nothing But A Living Dead Girl

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by Ashesh901/11/14

What a sad sentiment : but you do matter to us ,

Storm & we value you !

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by todski2801/12/14

so much visceral pain

in your poetry, that it is hard to read sometimes. sometimes we need to just get shit out of our own head, the inherent pain in this piece is I think highlighted and supported by the broken rhythm in the line lengths.

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