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Brother's Revenge

byPaul Yearwood©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/03/06

nope

not enough detail and if she was fucking her father i wouldnt touch her.

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by gamer964303/03/06

ditto

i would be like

"i was trying to be polite thinking youre ignorant, young and stupid. i would have fucked you until you passed out but you want dad so be it. you choose which bed you want to sleep in now sleep in it and leave me alone."

if she threw her cherry away to her dad what the fuck you know?

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by Anonymous08/16/06

dumb

So stupid, I regret the time I'm taking to comment.

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by Anonymous10/11/07

Awful

Let me say that I've read alot of storys, and this one is one of the worst.

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by Anonymous05/16/10

Nice Combonation

i liked the little bit of bondage you threw in there. That was kinda unexpected.

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by Anonymous11/06/11

Can't believe it

Sloppy seconds no thank you. This story was completely ridiculous. He should just have moved out, and let her have her father to herself. No problem, no loss, seriously....

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Dumb

Just dumb!

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