Aftermath

Wow!

I haven't seen crap like this in awhile. Rape? I thought that was a no, no on this site.
This, so called story, has nothing in it worth reading and I will certainly NEVER read anything this author ever writes again.

another great

fucking loser, you and your stories are puke.

Disgusting

I'm amazed that this story was allowed to be posted. There is nothing remotely redeeming about this story.

Well, I liked it: 5*****

And I'll keep reading your work. tom anon

Wrong Catagory

Should be in Non-Consent so I'd know to avoid it.

utter crap. its rape, not lw.

Every single story from this monumental asshole is exactly the same. If not for rape I'd say this guy couldn't get laid if it was thrown in front of him. Hence all the rape stores. This author sucks to be honest!

Sad

I really enjoy most of your work. This one, though, was sad, not only from its being in the wrong category. If Jenny and the narrator had prior sessions, you should have hinted that. If not, why would he do that to someone he liked well enough to invite to his house?

Rape is the only way this guy can get laid

In the real world he'd be in the slammer or dead - rape the wrong woman and he would find a very unhappy man (or woman - there have been revenge cases in the US where the raped woman armed herself, tracked the rapist down, and - blam!!!!!

Predictable

Enough is plenty! Maybe, by now, too many!

Hoping Ashson is NOT a one-trick (hehehe) pony!

4*

Damn

Not cool. How 'bout the husband comes to and kicks your ass? You've written better.

Interesting

I thought Philip Marlowe was dead.

It's still rape

Even if they both enjoyed the experience it would be rape. However we do not know what happened after the shower. Could it be they 'made up'? Also it is a non-con story however you look at it.

Ashon is just a rapist that hasn't been caught yet 1*

Nothing clever about this rape.

A waste of time as are most of Ashson's stories.

Sad**

Read.

crappy ending

I prefer the ending where she returns 10 minutes later with the cops. He gets arrested but not before he resists and is turned into bloody pulp for his efforts
he gets convicted for forced rape she sues and wins his house and most of his worldly possessions. Meanwhile in jail, her lifer brother daily teaches him what rape is like. Yeah, that's the ending I wanted.

Outstanding

Outstandingly lame that is... Just a lousy story in every way.

ending sucks

greg should have woken up...
and got revenge ;)

Ignore the idiots

Delightfully tongue in cheek as usual.

For those who don't like non-consent don't read from this category. And for goodness sake this is fantasy not reality.

not cool, as written it is RAPE

it could have been so much better as reluctance