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lame
There goes three minutes I will never get back. I am thinking you look nothing like you describe yourself, quite young, definitely a perv and you never ended up with any of the women you describe. You are just an unfaithful cheat looking to justify it to yourself. First and last story I assume.
personal attacks
This wasn't even the type of story I find appealing but what's with the personal attacks? The imagery was great. The fantasy sex bit was good if short. The plot was absent and the protagonist was not at all interesting to me, but the author clearly has something to build on.
this could be a good start
Promising start-I'm looking forward to seeing how the story develops.
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