All Comments on 'Pleasure'

but almost feel like the first half can be trimmed out and start the poem at .

....lubricious, just some thoughts, but a solid write that got better as it went along.

Gave me a sense of seduction over riding indecisiveness, building passion

Full of heart and sexual passion. I feel quite tired!

I take everything into consideration since this is my first time submitting my work. Thanks, again!