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by Maria239401/12/14

I liked

the rhythm, and it seemed fast, if that makes sense. However, I was left wondering about the last line. You lost me. still a good work.

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by Cleardaynow01/13/14

Liked it

I totally agree with maria. I liked the rhythm - redolent of an old fashioned American crime story or film. Am also totally lost by the last line.

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by susansnow01/13/14

You Blow Them Both

To make them do what they should.

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