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Cities of Power Ch. 04

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by Anonymous

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by shyintx01/19/14

So glad to see a new chapter of this story. Please say it won't take as long for the next one.

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by Anonymous01/21/14

I agree with the first

I loved this chapter as I do your other stories but its hard waiting for them. Hopefully we don't have to wait so long for another chapter along with some of your other stories

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by Softsungskylark02/20/15

??

Where is the rest of this story?

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by Anonymous11/15/15

rest of the story

Will there be more

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by Anonymous01/17/16

disappointed

It has been two years, are you going to finish this story?

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by mswyo04/09/16

More! I can't stand not knowing what happens. You are truly talented abd have a great gift for story telling.

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by xelliebabex04/10/16

Next

This story is next on my ist to finish after I have completed the one I am currently working on.

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by Anonymous10/12/16

Thank you Ellie

Thank you for noticing that you left a cliff hanger to a wonderfully written story. I will await with the anticipation of a horny restrained submissive for the next touch.

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