Well, that was a nice surprise for Bro-in-Law! The plot, story-line, and delivery were fine and fun, but an editor could help with some grammar slips. Thanks for writing!
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Well, that was a nice surprise for Bro-in-Law! The plot, story-line, and delivery were fine and fun, but an editor could help with some grammar slips. Thanks for writing!
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