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The Mist of Time Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/18/14

Decent start, but

It is a good start, but it is so short.
Another page and I would have a good feel for it.

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by mavir901/20/14

Great Start

I had to chuckle at your intro to this story "I you want reality? Go read a newspaper." On this side of the pond most news is fairytales spit out be socialists liberals. Any way I do enjoy stories from your country as they always have a different environment to them, be it landscape, language, and even sometimes food. All these differences seem to enhance the story and cause me to stop and look things up for my own edification.

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by bruce2201/20/14

Nice Start

Good to see Chad and Lilly again... I love your shady characters.

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by rightbank12/04/15

anyone who wants to know about Lily and the reason for her scars

need only read another of this authors very good stories.

I will say only that the image is etched in my memory.

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by Anonymous04/05/16

I tried, but they are ALL garbage !

And 'rightbank', did you know that if you leave your tongue in someone ass for too long you won't be able to pull it out ??

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by billsmith713711/08/16

Why is it

When a foul mouth makes a comment like that, they aren't man or woman enough to sign their name

Bill

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