The Concert

As a self-proclaimed novice contributor...

Since LT1963 states his inexperience as a writer of erotica, it would be wise to post stories about a week apart. Things like the word-choice/spelling could be fixed easily before the next three get submitted. Shifting over to more dialogue and less narration might delay submission a bit more, but result (IMO) in a better rating!

Decent read. A little more description would have made it even better. All in all, a good read.

One of the tags should probably have mentioned the PEE

or golden shower ... as that is not a turn on for everyone.

I liked the setup - and the story - but that part - not my cuppa tea.