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by Carnevil901/25/14

Very nice!

Love that final line! Very erotic yet almost innocent at the same time. Short, sweet story that lets you know there is much more to come, whether it gets written or not.

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by Anonymous01/27/14

WILDLY EROTIC MILIEU

That was very hot! Full 5 star writing. The surprise 4 me is that such a short story could so clearly define character motivation and passion.

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