You know, being enemies and all I would have thought she'd be abit more opposed to the idea of being raped but well.....you kids and you're S&M stuff. (I'm joking of course). I look forward to the next part of the series.
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Anonymous01/19/14
Too Quick
If Paul really cared, he would have consoled her and then the next day or even that night made his move.
As I believe Paul to be more mature and grown up than Angelo, please give a description of these lovers: I imagine Paul has a dusting of dark hair on his gorgeous masculine chest, and that Jenny can trace her fingers through the soft hair on his chest as a turn-on for them both. I also imagine his generous pubic bush meshing with her mound during their love-making.
This ia a sweet story. Paul is a great guy who cared about her all along. He proved it by not taking advantage. He even warned her about Angelo. Is he perfect, no. But hands down, he's worth knowing. 5 stars. Great story.
Ashson writes witty and amusing dialog in all his stories. Especially for his female characters. That dialog alone creates the pace, suspense, conflict, and funny turns in his plots.
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Anonymous03/12/14
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... that DoktahZ hasn't written anything yet despite his/her Comment about Ashson's story!
Actually the story "Guess What?" was quite well written, and amusing, despite the errors.
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I hope this is part one.
You know, being enemies and all I would have thought she'd be abit more opposed to the idea of being raped but well.....you kids and you're S&M stuff. (I'm joking of course). I look forward to the next part of the series.
Too Quick
If Paul really cared, he would have consoled her and then the next day or even that night made his move.
Please
This is just stupid.
No
This is dumb
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Are all the writers on this site wankers
Paul and Jenny
As I believe Paul to be more mature and grown up than Angelo, please give a description of these lovers: I imagine Paul has a dusting of dark hair on his gorgeous masculine chest, and that Jenny can trace her fingers through the soft hair on his chest as a turn-on for them both. I also imagine his generous pubic bush meshing with her mound during their love-making.
I liked it.
This ia a sweet story. Paul is a great guy who cared about her all along. He proved it by not taking advantage. He even warned her about Angelo. Is he perfect, no. But hands down, he's worth knowing. 5 stars. Great story.
A polished skill
Ashson writes witty and amusing dialog in all his stories. Especially for his female characters. That dialog alone creates the pace, suspense, conflict, and funny turns in his plots.
I see ...
... that DoktahZ hasn't written anything yet despite his/her Comment about Ashson's story!
Actually the story "Guess What?" was quite well written, and amusing, despite the errors.
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