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by Anonymous

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by Ashesh901/15/14

great interweavin' of real life traumas

iton the poem !!

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by Maria239401/16/14

too bad we cannot vote!

I enjoyed your poem. I would lose the word "small" in the stanza about your problems, but enjoyed the read.

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