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The Fantasy Bride

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/19/14

Very well done!!

Great loving wife story! Thanks for writing!

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by svg101/19/14

Steamy

Nice entry to Loving Wives, no broken hearts or broken promises. Just pure love.

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by Anonymous01/20/14

Ummm...

Who is Julie?

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by Anonymous01/20/14

Great

Great Story. Fun read. Still, please do that little bit more proofreading to avoid the, "Who is Julia?" issues. That really does distract us as readers as we get into your scene-- thoughts of whether there is another woman there or whatever. Thanks for your good work.

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