That's a little harsh! If he has an ounce of respect for his brother then of course he will pull out! Maybe not the next time and especially if these situations become more frequent.
My favorite genre of story is in-law (BIL, FIL, SIL, DIL, MIL) and this story rates high
Thanks for the feedback!
Ramon - glad you liked it :)
"Anonymous": 1: There's a line in there that says "Distantly, he remembered that she wasn't his, and that he would have to wait for that fantasy to come true." Though having to wait for something is hard to understand for some, for others it brings more tension and interest. (And room for a potential sequel)?
2: SOME guys have self-restraint.
3: Though not all people have to like all stories, negative comments without constructive criticism are a waste of space for writers who would appreciate something more than personal opinions about sexual ability.
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Rubbish
Was good till he pulled out if he was that worked up no way would he do that his mined would not let him
RUBBISH ???
That's a little harsh! If he has an ounce of respect for his brother then of course he will pull out! Maybe not the next time and especially if these situations become more frequent.
My favorite genre of story is in-law (BIL, FIL, SIL, DIL, MIL) and this story rates high
I'm hoping we hear more about Dianne & Max!
Thanks!
Thanks for the feedback!
Ramon - glad you liked it :)
"Anonymous": 1: There's a line in there that says "Distantly, he remembered that she wasn't his, and that he would have to wait for that fantasy to come true." Though having to wait for something is hard to understand for some, for others it brings more tension and interest. (And room for a potential sequel)?
2: SOME guys have self-restraint.
3: Though not all people have to like all stories, negative comments without constructive criticism are a waste of space for writers who would appreciate something more than personal opinions about sexual ability.
Excellent
I enjoyed it, and look forward to your next one.
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