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The Mist of Time Ch. 03

byKezza67©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/20/14

I liked your previous story

and this new one starts to roll nicely.

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by bruce2201/21/14

Well written

A bit short to be a full chapter but enough is happening. Enter yet another young lady! The land sounds wonderful.

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by rightbank12/04/15

more of an interlude

than a chapter. but the stage is being set.

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by rightbank02/29/16

what a fun series

personality and sass

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