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Whew!
Thought you forgot about us! LOL. Thanks, again, for your writing. Ever since JimBob44 had to quit, only you, StangStar06, and DeYeKen are actively writing. cantbuymy appears to have stopped writing. Too bad. I like his stuff. Kingkey hasn't written anything in a while, and Castle Stone is gone. But your writings keep your fans going. Thanks, Jim
Thank you
I've enjoyed reading your series and looking forward to more. Thank you for sharing.
And this is where i stop reading
You've manage to only have 2 partial sex scene in this whole story not even and its has been rushed for far too much of the story. Then you drop that bomb of sunny and deer and that margarita is too frail for a 46 year old... yeah no im done, I cant I tried but i feels like a rushed PG-13 Wattpad story. if you paced yourself it could have been flawless.
and on to the wrap up
We haven't heard about Admiral Emma since her "Maiden" voyage?
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