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Spectacular,
wonderful. . . . .
lovely...
... hardly ever read something so comforting. Enjoyed it a lot. Thanx
Nice ending
I have found that endings are usually a way for the author to escape the story. They're rushed and often time contrived. This ending was anything but contrived. It's a perfectly logical conclusion to a well written story. Thank you.
Thanks once again
A worthy addition to the Lisa Jones canon. Once again she stretches our erotic imagination in intriguing, exciting, and stimulating ways. Her stories continue to be prime examples of what thought provoking, emotionally involving, and eminently enjoyable erotic literature should be all about. Please keep up the great work, Miss Lisa.
great wrap up
All loose ends taken care of nicely. Glad you brought Jen into the mix with her perspective at the end. Very well done story. One of the very few that kept me coming back for more and more! I'll miss this storyline, though I do see severasl openings for a sequel.
Kudos!
I got to say this is one excellent Story you wrote.
Again
A funny poke at the some of the sillyness of both sex's hidden in interesting story. Once again Miss Lisa Jones creates something fun, clever and enjoyable to read. Thank you Miss Jones.
Great story, well written!
Enjoyed it. Nice ending too.
terrific
MissLJ, again your imagineering has created an excellent tale. Well crafted and your characters are believable. Nest of all, you succeeded at the at bane of all writers, to create a strong ending. Congratulations
Charming!
I enjoyed this! Not a lot on the sexual front, but it didn't need it; it was well told and charming, a nice little story. Good work!
I cried...
...from sheer joy at the way you ended this. Well done! A truly remarkable tale that deserves to be published. Please visit Amazon and check out how easy it is to self epub. You will make a fortune!
Heart touching story
Great story , well developed and nice ending...........
WOW............
please tell me if there is any other cute love stories like this...........
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