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Chapter 4 is already submitted and pending site approval
Chapter 4 is already submitted. It's a bit darker than the preceding chapters. Every story needs its "Empire Strikes Back" moment.
Getting better
Each chapter has progressively been better from a story telling perspective.
I'm struggling with the shortness. I find it difficult to get into stories that are provided in this small of chunks.
There is a lot of detail that isn't here, which could flesh the story out and make it richer, giving us a better and clearer picture and make them longer so we can immerse better.
Another great installment
Enjoyed reading this one as well! Very creative and imaginative storytelling. And highly erotic too. :)
Definitely look forward to reading Chapter 4 when it appears!
Chapter 5 has been submitted
Chapter 5 awaits site approval. It's a steamy one to make up for the lack of sex in Chapter 4.
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