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Secret of Witchcraft Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by A_Little_Show01/24/14

Chapter 4 is already submitted and pending site approval

Chapter 4 is already submitted. It's a bit darker than the preceding chapters. Every story needs its "Empire Strikes Back" moment.

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by NW_bi_boy01/25/14

Getting better

Each chapter has progressively been better from a story telling perspective.

I'm struggling with the shortness. I find it difficult to get into stories that are provided in this small of chunks.

There is a lot of detail that isn't here, which could flesh the story out and make it richer, giving us a better and clearer picture and make them longer so we can immerse better.

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by menatv01/25/14

Another great installment

Enjoyed reading this one as well! Very creative and imaginative storytelling. And highly erotic too. :)

Definitely look forward to reading Chapter 4 when it appears!

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by A_Little_Show01/28/14

Chapter 5 has been submitted

Chapter 5 awaits site approval. It's a steamy one to make up for the lack of sex in Chapter 4.

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