Bi-Curious No Longer

I don't see husband's mentioned at all....

Are they even married?

Well written

Good erotic story. No one can complain about the content because your title tells it all. Still, to fit in the LW category and just to make these women more interesting, you should have given us some background. Thanks for your story.

Your story got me rock hard...not that's what you might have hoped to achieve, haha.
Keep writing because you have a lot of talent, and thanks for sharing your erotica with us.
---Bill---

It would sure be nice...

if you would write in the first person ie: I said she was dressed in, she said, I said...etc.

Wrong Category (in Spades!)

Let us forget it is all-narration. The two lovers don't really talk, except through the narrator (a little!).

Is there a wife? Kinda ... the narrator does mention Hubby in ONE paragraph! Very minor (and even more 'very' - irrelevant) mention! Is this story about ANY aspect of Sweetie's relationship with Her Hubby? Nope! Is it about two ladies (of ANY marital status) getting into each other's laundry! YEP!!!
Lesbian. Pure. Simple! Move it there!

Yeah

2nd person narrative is hard and you probably should have posted this in Lesbian category.

beautiful

I thought your story was just beautiful and if it was in the lesbian category I would never have found it. Thank you.

I appreciate the feedback

Thanks for the comments, guys... This is my first and only submission to Literotica, so I appreciate the comments and opinions. I wrote this for a real woman I share messages and pics with online, thus the lack of background (but I can certainly see that would have helped the story for the rest of the readers).

I posted this in Loving Wives because that's what she and I are. She and I are both happily married and have no desire for anything more than some hot sexual play time. Neither one of us has ever acted on our fantasies about other women, and maybe never will, and neither one of us considers ourselves homosexual. I am glad to know some folks have enjoyed the story - I know I enjoy thinking about her and I together like this. :) Perhaps I will post some of the stories I've written about hubby and I. Thanks again!

Delicious

Everything about your story oozes sensuality and lust!!!! Fabulous story I simply love it

Wonderful read

A wonderful story of online love becoming reality!
Just beautiful!!
You know what this did to me!! I told you elsewhere! :)

Perfect AND in the right Cat. F the rules about 2nd person whatever.

It's perfect. And in EXACTLY the right section. I didn't search for lesbians, but loving wives who think naughty lesbian fantasies and then maybe try them for real. Some of you people can't think up much to complain about. I enjoyed this story very much. Thanks for writing it, posting it, and sharing your private exp.