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The Mist of Time Ch. 05-06

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by Anonymous

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by drmrblu01/23/14

Please continue

The story is just beginning to get interesting. There are a good many other details needed to flesh out this story. So far you are keeping it interesting. Thanks

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by bruce2201/23/14

Delicious reading

Lively dialogue. Romantic interest on the horizon. Adelaide and Rupert? Ghosts? Fun, but definitely fantasy, I think.

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by fanfare08/31/14

fascinating (Classical definition)

K67, you did it again. Another story developing complexity of characters and suspense, chapter by chapter.

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by rightbank12/04/15

another morsel

with another tease

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