Would You Like to Sneak a Peek?

Good one!

Another 'hot pocket' of poetry, congrats Susan, it's entertaining and hot!

My only comment is "I wonder how many readers have already imagined this scene with Susan and themselves?" A great piece, well written and highly erotic! Thanks SJP! :) jaybird

you talking to me?

yes I think you are!

HOT AND GRAPHIC

CONGRATULATIONS!
There is a sliver in my mind through which I see you when you close your bedroom door.
If I could, I would expand that line into a poem to complement your poem. Like so many of your exceptionally gifted erotic submissions this poem transcends into those mysterious realms where yearning and sexuality blend into the human experience.
FIVE STARS. THANKS FOR SHARING.