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Bride of Kong 04

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by Hypoxia06/15/14

Dear Readers: HELP ME!!

I am thinking of combining all the BRIDE OF KONG chapters into a novella -- with just ONE ending. I am still not happy with how I finished this. I am open to suggestions -- what do YOU think would be the best possible ending?

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by Anonymous07/08/14

Good story but you really need just one good ending when you rewrite this as a novella.

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by fanfare10/16/14

interesting challenge

Hypoxia, I'm not sure if this is still an ongoing project for you. Perhaps you have already imagineered the book.

If you ever read any of my stories, you would know I have a tendency towards violent confrontations and resolutions.

The only major storyarc I come up with so far. Would be the a violent uprising by the clones and hybrids to rescue Linda and make her their Goddess/Queen.

But, they just did the movie a couple of years ago. So much for originality.

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