It's Only Acting

exciting set up

Very exciting set up, good detail, but you could have exploited the premise more fully; as it was, the outcome was a bit too pat, like Sexy Urban Legends, but it was still very erotic.

Cery Good.

It would have benefitted though from a little more buildup of tension and uncertainty on the part of the husband. The way she confessed though was very good.
Good job and give us more.

Wrong viewpoint?

I wonder if it might have been more effective had the second half of the story been told by the wife. That way, you could describe the shock/surprise of the "accidental" penetration, rather than doing so by post-coital dialogue.

Teen age writer

Reads like a wet dream by a horny teen-ager. If you like teen-age writing it's fine; other wise skip reading it.
the Ct.Yankee

Just another whore wife story makingthe husband look stupid whire the wife lets another manshoot his sperm into her body

WTF

Why didn't you suck his cum out of her cunt first wimpboy???? Are you sure you even have a set of balls????? Do us a fovor and don't post anymore bullshit.

Okay! Why not?

A little fuck didn't do any harm since he wouldn't wear it out and there was plenty of pussy for her husband after the quick fuck.

of their was pussy left

she's a actor slut, i'm all for swinging or seeing her with another man if that's what you agree to "TOGETHER" but she's just antoher cheating slut.

well at least she had plenty for hubby too

I think hubby knew she was going to cheat, but she also gave hubby plenty, so I wouldn't complain either

Right....

Hope hubby gets to do a little "only acting" with another starlet.... How could wifey object.

Sloppy seconds... Sorry not a turn on... Disgusting actually.

god damn--short and fucking sweet. loved it.

No Good

Acting or not, it's just the beginning. The beginning of the end. The end of the marriage.

Not a problem

What's the bid deal if his wife fucks in front of all those people - her pussy not his!

And this was only opening night

Bet he hopes it has a 6 month run, 6 "performances" a week at least. And he'll be at every one. Probably will suggest that she have Kingsley over during the week as well for extra rehearsals. Oh, it's great to have a tramp for a wife!

Nice but Dim

No sign of any anguish, any doubts or misgivings on behalf of the husband, just another happy cuckold. (or a dumbo in cloud cuckoo land)

It only a writer acting

Swing and a miss... Kind of wish there were a separate category for cucks maybe Lit would consider this.

hubby comes off as submissive

and more than a little dumb. the writing was ok, i just hate those 'sitcom-stupid' characters. theres a lot of that in this catagory.

What misses in this story...

What misses in this story are feelings...This story seems about two married Robots, with no feelings that just comment bleakly about their lives...1*

dear annony. a slow painful deth just like your marriage right?

You're the shit pile on Lit and in life. You need to be put down!!

WACC

So now hubby's free to get some on the side too, right? I know I sure would be. Not sure I'd fuck her until she was tested. Where the hell is the loving husband category instead of this cuck crap?

I believe

I would have came and went away forever.... When she sobered up... no me around