Lions Lament

much richer than the usual dominance pieces, offering insight into a world alien to me. i think you genuinely try to bring understanding with this.

only two places i felt you slipped into clichéd 'speak', and that was with your use of 'disembowelment with a rusty spoon' (it's the spoon, really, the go-to image for gouging out things with a blunt instrument), and 'wanton desire' which is so overused as to be thoughtless in this piece which deserves better. the whole is well worth the read.

The print of my palm on your cheek .......

These words will ensnare a Spanko anytime , anywhere , Leo ! 5-ed