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by Headguy01/23/14

Curious to see where this is going

The opening pace seemed just right, then things speeded up in a somewhat contrived way. At first I thought the story was a "one and done," but since it is called a saga, I am hoping for more.

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by Anonymous09/09/14

Your writing sucks, please stop. It hurts my eyes every time I see you've written another shitty story!

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