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Cheeseburger Bitch

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by Anonymous01/25/14

Hahah

I'd like to have this filthy douche bag's DNA cross checked against the rape database.

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by Anonymous01/25/14

Juvenile, repetitive and boring.

Please check your punctuation and capitalization more carefully or, if you are unable to spot the errors, have someone more knowledgeable edit for you.

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by Anonymous01/29/14

What did I just read?

This read like crappy fratire. I enjoy Tucker Max's books, but this was just garbage. It read like someone who wants to be like Tucker Max, but lacks talent of any kind even for fiction.

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