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by Ashesh901/20/14

Bitter , true-life

Calculations !

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by greenmountaineer01/21/14

Liked the word play. I think it's risky to make iconic references of modern pop culture in poems, but it works here. I think the fact that the poem is short and the two stanzas contrast so well with each other is why. I like it when a poem makes me think as much about format as it does the content. This does.

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