by roughboy18
you can't be having this much pleasure in making us wait. impatiently waiting for the next chapter. fantastic story.
Wow! You broke my lecherous stalker, multi-year streak of reading and not commenting. Additionally, you are one hell of a practitioner of denial. This series is amazingly well written and not just the super hot sex. I cannot wait to learn about Guy's secrets and pains. I look forward to the next fix.
Here's a writer who knows the delicious tension will be all over as soon as the reader is given what they want. Lead 'em up to the edge and then yank the prize away - keeps the pages turning. Excellent! [And so very very, hot, BTW.]
Really good writing and interesting story, however the prolonging of the teasing aspect is getting boring. The both behave like some bipolar, guilt-ridden women. Which is even more unusual for a charakter like Guy who is supposed to be a dominant type. I do hope the story improves, because this is already chapter 4.
They're both as bad as each other and for some reason can't seem to speak to each other at all! It's like just tell him you like him FFS! Great story idea but yeah, just a bit long with these two drama heads lol.