All Comments on 'Powers to Be'

She'll be never argue with him, never hold him accountable , never be an actual partner in their relationship. She'll never have free will. Prostitution, murder, robbery, anything he wants her to do, she will do.

That's not a life, that is a hell.

Will he be corrupted by the power? Will there be nasty unintended concequences if he doesn't control his thoughts? Many possibilities?

Good start, more please?

Does this power extend to say her sisters as well? Or girlfriends? or his co-workers?

Hope you are planning on more and Maybe he could get his G/F to bring a Third.

So all you gotta do is stick your finger on the live feed to a extractor fan? Hmmmm sounds well worth a try! Good story tho. . .

Sweet story, really nice - could be 'fleshed out' (no pun intended) with more descriptive detail, less rushed. EG, what does she look like? How did her ass feel? More dialogue would give it more punch. Go for it, amigo!

Like all the others said except the one that clearly doesn't know what mind control is.

Eager to hear what happens next, and in their future!