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This is a great story so far...
This is such a good story to read and I'm really enjoying it. I can't wait to read more. Thank you for sharing.
Argh.... too short!
That was a teaser chapter! More, more!!! I want to know what happens between Daniel & Bella.
Most acceptable
This story has begun a life of its own. This has become something to seek out for me to see where things are going. You have managed to create your own dimension that you drop your readers into and time has no meaning. Thank you for sharing that little world with the rest of us. Needless to say, this story is very enjoyable to read and reflect on as the characters come to life and provide a very pleasant distraction to the reader. I am sure this might speak for other readers as well, you have a wonderful way of painting the life of someone, several someones, who seem timeless, well mannered, interesting, and fair to both friend and enemy alike. Please do continue this tale and allow the rest of us to be transported to another world for an enjoyable interval of time. Thank you for sharing and compliments to who ever edits your stories, they read nearly seamlessly--very very few grammatical distractions.
Great Story
I search for this story every morning while I enjoy some coffee. I just had to look up "Mother's Ruin" since I was not familiar with that beverage. It sounds like a great summer drink that I shall try. I will also give the Sommerset Pork a go, I found a British recipy for that.
A very good read...
...but short. I'm certain you have a lot of this tale already written if not all of it. I'd like to enjoy more than a two or three minute read per segment. Why not consider joining two or more of your current sized chapters together? Please???? Other than the length, an excellent read. Fuddpucker
Nicely handled
Though I have a hard time with the idea that he rang the hooker's bell without a lot of previous experience on his part.... But he is right in that he is in a different culture now and should move carefully, though she is definitely upper class, and from my experience they have more sexuality then most of the less privileged, since they are rarely scared of anything...
it is nice to see the human side
of these characters.
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