It's bittersweet struggle one could argue well, no matter the DNA of this one's loving saviour. It is so very palatable when set against the backdrop of an old adversary to every living being's sense of love for life.... WAR!!
The demons have no heart to inspire a respectable lust, and are relegated to mere pests who've no wit for stalking...no want but for the kill, and that stagnant air over Nam was held in place by bullet salesmen and ambassadors of free enterprise who made the truly sick perversion within this story. Calling our family to support the affair and serve with honor in the prosecuting of it. ....and still, we are prosecuting war as equally unfocused in its cause as it was forty years ago. There is no war in the heavens over mothers and sons, lest you stir the most unGODly hornet's nest of retribution to be imagined borne of being, lest you contrive your own heart to believe that war is your most reliable friend, you'll remain worthy THE mother's love, no matter the being's stature among the self-aware....
...there's a gong in there somewhere where a song should be...
I'll bet a dollar to a dime on SusanJillParker's insights into the most compelling matters... you have a moral to this story... hardly Aesop's exclusive territory, ehh?
Maybe I'm a bit slow, but the build up and surprise ending are fantastic and unexpected!
Very impressive and emotional story, well written and thought out thoroughly! Almost makes me think of things I could have or should have said to my Mother before she passed 38 years ago-really makes a person think of many things in their life, especially the waste of Viet-Nam and the many lives lost and hearts and families broken. All in all a very good read and 5 star entry for the St. Valentine Day contest, Susan Jill Parker, you really know how to push a reader's buttons-especially mine! Smiling through the tears on this one, you are number one! Thanks :) jaybird :)
Thank you all for reading, voting, and/or commenting on my story. I wanted to write something different than the typical incest story. I wanted to write a love story that was dedicated to Michael's mother.
How hard must it been for her to see her son, her only family, going off to war. What better conveyance of love to give her son before leaving to go overseas than to give him her body.
The fact that he searched for her all those years gave testimony to their true love.
It is always the one you remember so vividly, no matter how long ago, who gave you freely the physical intimacy that continues to stir your inner soul in times of need, mine was forty years ago, thanks for bring it all back.
take you for bringing back memories of mine from forty plus years ago i spent 18 mos. as a pow. when i returned home i was messed up my wife left me but my mom never showed me anything but love and helped me get my s--- together. without her I would never have gotten back to myself. great story like all of your stories keep writing please wish i could give you more than five stars.
I am not a fan of incest stories but this was not really an incest story. It was a love story. Worth much more than 5 stars. Thank you for writing Susan.
Thank you so much for writing this. Obviously, it's a wonderful story, but for me it's more than that. I 've been reading the stories written for this contest, about one evey other day, and I've been disappointed in the quality of the writing. A lot of them go along all right and then just stop. When I saw that you had submitted one, I knew that you would have a good ending in mind before you started, and that the words would flow smoothly as your always do. So again, thank you for giving me a treat. I hope you win. You deserve to.
Oh BTW, I hope you're doing well in Texas, with your horses. Last time we corresponded you were madly trying to wrap up a novel that had fallen behind schedule. I trust that went well and that you will be able to relax and enjoy Valentine's Day. Keep well and keep writing.
Reminds me of the first time taking a bath with mom. I was still young then and had just started ejaculating fluid when I masturbated to a climax. Maybe I should relate the whole incident in another submission.
English
A definite winner!
Susan you still are the very best!
Too good
I LOVE THE STORY AND SENTIMENT. Great story and ending. Keep going , I'll be waiting.
Aaahh...
Unusual concept. Very nicely executed.
Classic elements +..
It's bittersweet struggle one could argue well, no matter the DNA of this one's loving saviour. It is so very palatable when set against the backdrop of an old adversary to every living being's sense of love for life.... WAR!!
The demons have no heart to inspire a respectable lust, and are relegated to mere pests who've no wit for stalking...no want but for the kill, and that stagnant air over Nam was held in place by bullet salesmen and ambassadors of free enterprise who made the truly sick perversion within this story. Calling our family to support the affair and serve with honor in the prosecuting of it. ....and still, we are prosecuting war as equally unfocused in its cause as it was forty years ago. There is no war in the heavens over mothers and sons, lest you stir the most unGODly hornet's nest of retribution to be imagined borne of being, lest you contrive your own heart to believe that war is your most reliable friend, you'll remain worthy THE mother's love, no matter the being's stature among the self-aware....
...there's a gong in there somewhere where a song should be...
I'll bet a dollar to a dime on SusanJillParker's insights into the most compelling matters... you have a moral to this story... hardly Aesop's exclusive territory, ehh?
Maybe I'm a bit slow, but the build up and surprise ending are fantastic and unexpected!
Very impressive and emotional story, well written and thought out thoroughly! Almost makes me think of things I could have or should have said to my Mother before she passed 38 years ago-really makes a person think of many things in their life, especially the waste of Viet-Nam and the many lives lost and hearts and families broken. All in all a very good read and 5 star entry for the St. Valentine Day contest, Susan Jill Parker, you really know how to push a reader's buttons-especially mine! Smiling through the tears on this one, you are number one! Thanks :) jaybird :)
One of your best!
Loved it!
Very touching.
Five Stars! I loved it.
Oh Yeah...
Well you managed to do it again. I loved you tale. Well done. SJP you are the best.
Oops
....your.. Sorry these old fingers don't always go where the are pointed. LOL
Great story
Your story was very touching. Thanks 5 stars from me.
more truths than most know......
than you for recognizing some very touchy topics......top notch!!
Thank you
Thank you all for reading, voting, and/or commenting on my story. I wanted to write something different than the typical incest story. I wanted to write a love story that was dedicated to Michael's mother.
How hard must it been for her to see her son, her only family, going off to war. What better conveyance of love to give her son before leaving to go overseas than to give him her body.
The fact that he searched for her all those years gave testimony to their true love.
You always remember
It is always the one you remember so vividly, no matter how long ago, who gave you freely the physical intimacy that continues to stir your inner soul in times of need, mine was forty years ago, thanks for bring it all back.
enjoyed
take you for bringing back memories of mine from forty plus years ago i spent 18 mos. as a pow. when i returned home i was messed up my wife left me but my mom never showed me anything but love and helped me get my s--- together. without her I would never have gotten back to myself. great story like all of your stories keep writing please wish i could give you more than five stars.
Very good
I am not a fan of incest stories but this was not really an incest story. It was a love story. Worth much more than 5 stars. Thank you for writing Susan.
You still have the touch
Thank you so much for writing this. Obviously, it's a wonderful story, but for me it's more than that. I 've been reading the stories written for this contest, about one evey other day, and I've been disappointed in the quality of the writing. A lot of them go along all right and then just stop. When I saw that you had submitted one, I knew that you would have a good ending in mind before you started, and that the words would flow smoothly as your always do. So again, thank you for giving me a treat. I hope you win. You deserve to.
Oh BTW, I hope you're doing well in Texas, with your horses. Last time we corresponded you were madly trying to wrap up a novel that had fallen behind schedule. I trust that went well and that you will be able to relax and enjoy Valentine's Day. Keep well and keep writing.
I love a "Love Story"
You are incredible.
Bath time
Reminds me of the first time taking a bath with mom. I was still young then and had just started ejaculating fluid when I masturbated to a climax. Maybe I should relate the whole incident in another submission.
another story that brought a tear to my eye. your the best susan.
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