I still don't know what this story is about. Is it love, lust, naughtiness? Does she love her husband, want to leave him, give him creampies? The purpose for reading is enjoyment. Enjoyment for me is understanding the story, getting inside the characters, even guessing how they may react to a situation. I am left with many questions.
... A good mystery for the reader. I hope you don't stop there and continue to build the answers to many of the questions bouncing around in our collective heads.
Splendid writing. He should have eaten her pussy out and then thoroughly licked, sucked and tongue fucked her asshole out before he busted a nut inside of her. Memorys. Sweet.
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Good start! More please!
After reading this
I still don't know what this story is about. Is it love, lust, naughtiness? Does she love her husband, want to leave him, give him creampies? The purpose for reading is enjoyment. Enjoyment for me is understanding the story, getting inside the characters, even guessing how they may react to a situation. I am left with many questions.
A good start
A very good start, indeed.
Very good
I liked it. It is just the right length to tantalise.
Interesting...
... A good mystery for the reader. I hope you don't stop there and continue to build the answers to many of the questions bouncing around in our collective heads.
Next
What next....the end of a marriage or not?
Taste it.
Splendid writing. He should have eaten her pussy out and then thoroughly licked, sucked and tongue fucked her asshole out before he busted a nut inside of her. Memorys. Sweet.
What was that?
2**
Very nice
Not another word needed.
All i saw here was a cheating cunt and a douchebag that knew she was a cheating cunt fucking for a couple paragraphs.
Both need an arse kicking.
Bizarre but enjoyable
This site should be about entertainment, and that was entertaining!
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