What a lucky so and so. Thanks for sharing this little quickie!!
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Anonymous02/13/14
Good Start
I liked the story, good concept, but you should have drawn it out a little, you could have gone into more detail about what he did to her, then talked about they was they had sex.
English
just a tease
stopped just as it should have been getting going! :-(
Nice but
way too short..... I'd would have liked to read more.
Hope it continues
Too short
Great start, but it was just getting started.
She Had A Plan****
What a lucky so and so. Thanks for sharing this little quickie!!
Good Start
I liked the story, good concept, but you should have drawn it out a little, you could have gone into more detail about what he did to her, then talked about they was they had sex.
Really a good start.
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