Are you trying to see how many times you can retell the same story?
At least when a band like Depeche Mode releases a compilations of "remixes", they make a token effort to make the same songs distinguishable from one another. All you seemed to do here was some minor editing, and you didn't bother to include an explanation.
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Short, but looking forward to more.
Detailing some of Florence's teaching sessions would have made the piece longer and more enjoyable. Still, it was nice on its own. Keep working.
Are you trying to see how many times you can retell the same story?
At least when a band like Depeche Mode releases a compilations of "remixes", they make a token effort to make the same songs distinguishable from one another. All you seemed to do here was some minor editing, and you didn't bother to include an explanation.
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